tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post5279556051329319422..comments2024-01-19T03:39:14.242-07:00Comments on Notice Your World: Pieces of the BridgeCharlie Pulsipherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08877018077937978788noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post-43233503705184991322011-07-15T09:35:15.111-06:002011-07-15T09:35:15.111-06:00Its been like 3 weeks ... your vacation is OVER.Its been like 3 weeks ... your vacation is OVER.marknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post-26246476679099224692011-07-11T10:21:47.918-06:002011-07-11T10:21:47.918-06:00I liked this. If anything, I might point out that ...I liked this. If anything, I might point out that your use of adverbs is a little weak and you could use stronger verbs instead.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post-19085677573512039632011-06-30T21:57:47.249-06:002011-06-30T21:57:47.249-06:00Did you FINISH the first draft?
Why is everybody ...Did you FINISH the first draft?<br /><br />Why is everybody posting bits of their stories all of a sudden? I'm not jumping into this one.<br /><br />But I like what I've read.Chanelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18159248995263246944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post-82318570035817989312011-06-30T12:04:00.532-06:002011-06-30T12:04:00.532-06:00I'm not going to read this because, as River S...I'm not going to read this because, as River Song might say, "Spoilers!"<br /><br />I mean, good job, man! You the bomb writer.Brent Wescotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08313269993916969201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36555347547868129.post-16588697979634591142011-06-29T19:31:15.391-06:002011-06-29T19:31:15.391-06:00This is really good stuff, Charlie. I am looking f...This is really good stuff, Charlie. I am looking forward to seeing the finished product on bookstore shelves in a few years. :)<br /><br />You're almost done with the first draft? That's fantastic! Now for the fun part: The Re-Write! Woo Hoo! Good luck!Candicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09845151308757943750noreply@blogger.com